I have thesis about 3D printed horseshoes.
The
influence on locomotion, the influence on the pressure distribution
under the hoof and wear characteristics
There is feedback of teacher in the text, here is his general comment:
“I notice that writing, data presentation and discussion about the findings is not easy for you. If you feel that way too, I recommend that you ask someone to help you. I have tried to give suggestions in the hope that you get further with it. Remember that the discussion is not a repetition of the results, it is now a big part. And don’t forget to describe the results in light of what is known in the literature about hoof shoeing.”
In addition, there are other suggestions in the file.
So much has to be rewritten and some literature has to be searched.”
I want you to improve text significantly
